My first Kiss part 2

My first Kiss part 2

A Poem by Jane Doe
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part 3 ninja!

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Happened so suddenly,

So quick and so unexpected,

We were hugging then I relized something funk-ily,

Your lips were  coming towards mine But my heart never knew and your love was never detected.

 

Sparks flew,

Hearts grew,

Our feelings came as one,

As our lips were having fun.

 

I can't say I regretted it,

I don't just may it wasn't met for us two,

Just maybe someone more appropriate,

I have no clue just a suggestion with a missing "who".

 

Sparks flew,

Hearts grew,

Our feelings came as one,

As our lips were having fun.

 

 

© 2011 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
not as good as the first but what do you think?

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Jane Doe

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