How could you?

....It's about an angel....

How could you,

I was only a baby,

You lied to me about her,

Then you took advantage of me before I could say a word.

 

She yelled at you,

Clawed at you as you held the pillow tighter,

She cried as I took my last breath,

But when as it all flashed an Angel appeared.

 

When she appeard mommy disappeared,

She slashed you throat,

And took the pillow off me,

Opened my mouth.

 

She breathed life back into me,

The life you tried to take out of me,

I coughed and wailed,

Then I threw my bottle at your head causing a scar.

 

When I grew up 12 years later,

I beame your only hater,

Even mommy stood up for you,

I cant comprehend how though.

 

It is still unclear to me,

But I looked up your tombstone and found it,

I dug it up and the angel appeared,

I saw her better this time it was mommy together we spat words of hatred on your bare skin to rot and degrate over the years.

 

No we didn't even put you back in the ground,

Just laughed,

And talked,

The we walked off hand in hand away from a scumbag man.

 

Reviews

[Katannaism]

She slashed 'you(r) throat'.
But other than that tiny mistake, this is really good. Quite exquisite. The raw enery is well juxtaposed here.