2090

2090

A Poem by Jane Doe
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PROMPT CHOICE 3 You're living in 2090, and you fell in love over the internet with a guy, and you found out that he was a robot. What will your reaction be? by- Sweets

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2090

 

I love you I type,

Even though were about to talk on skype,

I turn on my camera typing in your number,

Just to be surprised with a GIGANTIC bummer.

 

Your a robot! I EXCLAIM!!!

He laughs monotonicly calm and tame,

I scream once more my first sentence,

He flicks me the bird and logs off that stupid menace.

 

I love you I type,

Even though were about to talk on skype,

I turn on my camera typing in your number,

Just to be surprised with a GIGANTIC bummer.

 

Your a .... and break off in giggles,

A hardy laugh to make my small frame jiggle,

With joy ofcourse while your mad and angered,

You watch me laugh then you get hanged and not heard.

 

I love you I type,

Even though were about to talk on skype,

I turn on my camera typing in your number,

Just to be surprised with a GIGANTIC bummer.

 

YOR A ..... ROBOT I EXCLAIM!

You laugh with your cute lion tangled in its mane,

I laugh along with you were giggling like a little kids,

We finish up and talk about our bids,

Our bids on love...

 

  

 

 

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
may be confusing but this is how I planned
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I like it. Really interesting. It's good you got into the prompts, and I like how you changed things up a little bit. I'm glad that you took the prompt and made it your own. I really can not wait to see what you come up with next!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't really understand this at all. I mean it was a good poem and I liked it. But what are you getting at here?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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