Death...

Death...

A Poem by Jane Doe
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DEATH!

 

You hate life,

And it feels like it hates you too no kids, no relationship, no husband or wife,

You cry and scream and even cut youself,

Why is it that bad that you have to hamr your health?

 

So...why die,

If so many try,
To save you from yourself,

We only want the best for your health.

 

Life sucks,

At the momement everything does,

Your heartt aches,

You head hurts you cry then get the shakes.

 

So...why die,

If so many try,
To save you from yourself,

We only want the best for your health.

 

If he doesn't love you,

You know I doo....

No matter how many times you cry,

My should will be there for you till the day we die.

 

So...why die,

If so many try,
To save you from yourself,

We only want the best for your health.

© 2010 Jane Doe


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Jane Doe
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This is great philosophy and rational advice, Abbigale.
Your mind is a beautiful place.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. Sounds like something my best friend says to me often. I really enjoyed this the emotion is clear and sweet it is now favorited! very good work

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you. I love you too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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