Limited Time

ehh BAH HAH!!!!

Our time has run out,

But instead of telling you to stay I just pout,

Then you leave,

And I start to dry heave.

 

Limited time,

For you and I,

Waiting for that chime at noon rings a ton,

Then our hearts will beat as one.

 

Finally throwing up at my thoughts of dying from gory deaths,

For the sake of Mary Beth you gasp,

You kneel beside me and attempt to revive me from the cuts on my wrists.

 

Two weeeks in the hospital because teh cuts were so bad and I had gone into a slight coma but through each step you were by my side,

When I Finally aawoke you try to hide,

Your tears from my sight,

So I try to comfort you to reach out but my sheets are to tight,

 

So I cry with you wishing we were free of the clock that ticking.

 

Free of burden,

Free of pain,

No family shame, 

So now no more hurting

Free of Time.

Author's Note

BAH HAH! tteehhee

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

this was a very sad and heartfelt write. The emotions are clearly portrayed. I found two typos the not teh and awoke not aawoke. the rest of the poem is really good and the flow is easy to follow.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

This was a good reading cookie..
very sad n emotional indeed..