Lonely

A Poem by Jane Doe

Listening to sad blues,

On a friday night sadly I didn't choose,

Not for us to break apart but ...

Eventualy we knew it had to happen,

Lonely once again crying my heart out,

You don't care obvisously just standing on your face only a pout.

Caring for you was hard but I manage,

Responsibly you blamed it on my family for my damage,

You laugh at my pain I am sure of it the monster you are tore us apart,

It wasn't even your digusting burps and farts,

Now I must be gone though I will miss you,

Gone for ever but if anyone ask I play it off like that is who?

For you my heart stopped and came in my throat,

On this moment forward no longer will it i'll keep it safe inside my coat,

Reversing back into my depression only this time it starts with a lie me telling my self i don't love you instead of starting with a confession.

When I saw you cry I cryed too,

However when it was visa versa you didnt even shed a sob or tear though I did for you,

Obvisouly I was played by a player from now I'll sob alone thinking of you though for it is true I do love you.

F(rom).O(ur).R(elationship)

You only wanted to tear me apart for the pure evilness joy I now despise you No I love you I don't know i'm confused,

On the contrary I didn't even feel like I was being used,

Under 6 feet from slitting my wrist right before i fell i made up my mind about my feelings for you

I LOVE YOU.

© 2010 Jane Doe

Author's Note

read the first letter of each stantza (only capitals)

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Victoria

This was sad. But it was really good. Great job

Posted 13 Years Ago

Voice11

A sad poem about a sad time. But eventually the sadness gets overwhelming enough so you can't even write. you did good getting out your emotions but I empathize with you that you had to go through great pain to write it.