terror

terror

A Poem by Jane Doe
"

biting

"

Terror filled eyes,

Screaming inside,

Problematic all around.

 

It's eyes give me jives,

I try to run and hide,

You cant even hear my scream not a sound.

 

I turn around to see what has bitten me was....

 

Tripping and falling left and right,

Disgusting mud I'm sliding around like a pig,

Turning around to face it.

 

And it's wraping around my neck tight

So I scratch and dig

Then it threw a ginormous fit.

 

I turn around to seee what has bitten me?.....

 

Me

Myself

I bit me.

© 2010 Jane Doe


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Allright, hand over the hallucinogens.
Before you write any more of these lovely little insanities.
I like it but I am not sure why.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) ...i think only i get y u wrote that haha it was good!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2010
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