Falling up

XoXoXo

Hug Kiss

Cinematic Passion.

lyrics to mr right w.t.a- I was thinking mr.right,

He was thinking right now,

I was thinking he looks tight,

He was thinking OH HOW!?!?!?.

 

Love,

Makeout,

Fairytale.

 

Use your mind and not you greed,

This is something I belive,

THink before you feed,

Think before you receive.

 

Te amo,

Reliable,

Predictable.

 

If I could fly away,

I'd turn around just to see you for the last time,

I'd leave CheasepeakBay,

And we'll be waiting for that chime.

 

Bessos ,

AMOR,

Him/Her+Him/Her=LOVE

Reviews

[Jeff Bresee]

Very nice. You write at a level well above your age.

[Tony]

I do like the way you just talk loose.
It's like walking down to the store with some chick rhyming alongside.
It seems a bit scattered, then, No.
I'll have another.....

[dreamer :)]

This was really good, but I think you should tie it together more by having each little section have something relative. It was kinda all over the place but I liked the adjectives! They really brought this poem alive!!! :)