First Kiss

My First Kiss

 

Our lips meet with a fiery passion burning,

My thirst being relieved,

My Heart beating fast than it was when you got your first shot(oww:'[ )

My Stomach Started Flopping and Turning,

From this kiss I received,

Almost like when you get your first tricycle as a tot.

 

Passionate but...,

Fierce,

Fierce but...,

My First.

Author's Note

what i want my first kiss to be like:)

Reviews

[Tony]

If you are serious about it being that seriously great, I am sure it will be.
For you will be ever so particular.
You are a smart kid.
Keep up the good work, people are watching you.
I remember my first kiss, way back in the 70s, it was less like a shot, more like lightning.
Thank you for the nice Memory of DawnMarie.

[Ashley.M.E]

Hmm, not the be a downer, more or less my thought because I have had my first kiss, it wasn't worth the wait, and the kid wasn't worth the kiss, but hey, hope yours comes true.

[loowzerX]

cute :)

[Jonathan De Elvira]

awww abbie-ish...
good job n very very cute....
the way u describe the first kiss was real...
some of us may experience tht way...
n, huhu...maybe perhaps one day u too will receive tht kinda first kiss..
anyway good job..:)

[Ellie ...]

=D I thought this was reeeally good. Short, but good. I think your stuff is great, good job(:

[Sharkapillar]

I like. :D Very descriptive, definitely an aspiration to chase.

[Brandon]

wow this was very calm and romantic i liked it keep up the good work