Top of Rock Bottom

Top of Rock Bottom

A Poem by Jane Doe
"

yes a song by we should whisper but my inspiration

"

Top of Rock bottom

 

Falling down,

Face first,

Till I hit Rock Bottom.

Smack right into Hell's(<--sorry but appopriate) Town,

Attempting to my thirst,

No faces of wisdom carved into my totem(poll).

 

Fell off my beach and hit rock bottem,

Still I kept Climbing to find the Top,

Now I've swam back to the Top,

To fall again right to the top of rock bottom.

_____________________________ from here on is remixed lyrics

Am I gunna Get up?,

Because

 

Dear God Dear God,

I've got a problem,

I woke up this morning at the Top of Rock Bottom.

 

I dislike the veiw,

Cause it's not That Great,

When I'm alaways Late,

For the train that'll take me away,

 

From the top of Rock Bottom.

 

© 2010 Jane Doe


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What a lovely title. Optimistic yet pessimistic at once, very poetic. I like this a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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