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A Poem by Jane Doe

Can't Breathe

 

Take a breather they say,

Calm down they say,

Just DEAL with it THEY SAY.

 

I don't CARE what they say anymore,

Half those girls are just w****s.

Peaceful pleasant death,

Deep enternal darkness,

Sure follow their lead smartness.

 

I can't belive you'd betray me,

Actually I can ,Ican't belive I trusted you,

I trusted you ,her , she.

I can't wait till you feel my pain too.

 

Take a breather they say,

Calm down they say,

Just DEAL with it THEY SAY.

 

no I say,

No I say,

NO I say!

 

that's all that matters to me anyways MY opion not yours.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
no not stuck up just opionated

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Amen.
Very powerful, very strong. Nice :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 25, 2010
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