Restless Nights
A Poem by Jane Doe
me unable to sleep with my pillow
Tossing,
Turning,
Kicking,
Drewling.
Screaming,
Dreaming,
Falling.
Fast asleep ,
Egging it on.
Running away in my jeep,
Crying in alarm.
© 2010 Jane Doe
Author's Note
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i sukkkkk :(
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Reviews
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This is so me :/
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Ahaaa no you don't wifey. You just need to go to sleep. You have to stop after atleast 3:00am xD Although I know you not going to listen XD
-Hubby Jurikosan
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Then stop writing at 6 in the morning XD Wait until you're awake, pull out a rhyming dictionary, and try your damnedest to make it sound good XD
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Hehe u wrote this when we up at like six in the morning huh?: )
It's kinda confusing but I like it, it's like a puzzle!
-BrookeMadison
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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weird but goood i like it a lot keep up the good work
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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no its good keep working on it
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 22, 2010
Last Updated on July 22, 2010
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