Restless Nights

Restless Nights

A Poem by Jane Doe
"

me unable to sleep with my pillow

"

Tossing,

Turning,

Kicking,

Drewling.

 

Screaming,

Dreaming,

Falling.

 

Fast asleep ,

 Egging it on.

 

Running away in my jeep,

Crying in alarm.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
i sukkkkk :(

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This is so me :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahaaa no you don't wifey. You just need to go to sleep. You have to stop after atleast 3:00am xD Although I know you not going to listen XD

-Hubby Jurikosan

Posted 14 Years Ago


Then stop writing at 6 in the morning XD Wait until you're awake, pull out a rhyming dictionary, and try your damnedest to make it sound good XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe u wrote this when we up at like six in the morning huh?: )
It's kinda confusing but I like it, it's like a puzzle!
-BrookeMadison

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

weird but goood i like it a lot keep up the good work

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no its good keep working on it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 22, 2010
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