sorrow

sorrow

A Poem by Jane Doe
"

problems

"

Caring

rolling over hearts

yoyo used like one anyway

i..m dying

no way im stay here

go LEAVE ME!

 

my problems

y..z *BOOM* there goes my heart

 

hearing you scream

eating at me constanly

ay i cant

really dying

to touch my face and then dissappear

 

ouchhh bett that hurt

u... and me no longer

to be.

© 2010 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
read first letter of each phrase
c,r,y,i,n,g m,y, h,e,a,r,t o,u,t,

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i noticed, And this is sad.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cute, girlie! Very creative! Great jobb!!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 6, 2010
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