Crying

Crying

every night for you,

Dying

slowly but painfully,

Bleeding

my heart out,

Keeping

my feelings inside carefully,

Sleeping

after my hearts ripped out but still looking for it about,

Screaming

my eyes and heart out waiting for you to return,

Loving

still, you,

Calling

but your not answering, my stomach still a churnin,

Snuggling

my pillow at night thinking it you soo not cool,

Crying

everyday for you

Knowing

Your dead and not returning home to me.

Author's Note

i just wanted to write it comes easier with sorrow and pain

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

The Sorrow and pain expressed in this piece, Has made me tear up. You have a natural sence of style

[Jennifer Neuman]

wow i love the structure, it really sets a good rhythm for what you are trying to say. I also love the wording, really nice job!