LOVEABLE!!!!

I wrote it because i feel so unloved right now so yea

The sign posted on my head reads[DESPERATE BUT LOVEABLE]
Is it me,
my breath,
do I have something in my teeth.

Sure I am Wierd,
odd,
outgoing,
Yeah, so what I speak my mind.

Should't I still be loved,
Shouldn't I have some one who cares,
Loves me for me,
NOT! my other half.

I am wierd,and PROUD OF IT,
ODD, too it's fun,
Outgoing, but God's creation,
Sure I speak my mind the spinach in your teeth would to if it could;)

I'm all that and more :) except not preppy!!!!!
EWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

Author's Note

LOVE ME!
PLEASE not too hard on the critisism but not to light i haven't wrote in a while PLEASE review!!!!!

Reviews

[DBURKE]

This is a really good poem and I love the message in it. I guess there is something to be said about writers because I think we all feel like we are odd or wierd (based off of the ones I know that is) but I agree with this everyone is loveable no matter who they are! (here is the little critique there is a sp error 3 to last line to should be too_ thats all =)

[Jordan's Back]

Should't I still be loved,
Shouldn't I have some one who cares,
Loves me for me,
NOT! my other half.

You should be loved and wanted, you are very special, and a very sweet person! Remember that always

[Kon™]

I like your enthusiasm and outgoing feeling in this poem. I like your message in this alot. Great job :)

[Lanky]

I must say, all writers feel like they are out of place or wierd (I surely do). I love the way your poem encapsulates how you feel about yourself. I saw that you reviewed one of my poems and i hope that you will check out more of them since you passed such harsh judgement on the first one =P haha Keep it up though because i like your style of poetry.

[gimpy]

it great a combination of sass and individuality I wish I had started writtting at your age