scarred

scarred

A Poem by Jane Doe

Scared

Scarred of what

weel there is alot

life

lonelyness

death

global warming

cancer

everything and more earth

so sad so misserable

© 2010 Jane Doe


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interesting message, everyone has fears but few will admit to all of theirs. My only real question is did you mean "scared (as in afraid) or scarred (to have scars)? As far the grammar and structure of the poem there are a few minor things i would change first it should be loneliness not lonelyness. second, i think weel should be well. and third miserable only has one "s".

Posted 14 Years Ago


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A Wonderful write

Posted 12 Years Ago


interesting message, everyone has fears but few will admit to all of theirs. My only real question is did you mean "scared (as in afraid) or scarred (to have scars)? As far the grammar and structure of the poem there are a few minor things i would change first it should be loneliness not lonelyness. second, i think weel should be well. and third miserable only has one "s".

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jane Doe
Jane Doe

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I miss the way words would flow out on to a page and express my deepest concerns so I have returned. more..

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