FLAWS

FLAWS

A Poem by Jane Doe

Flaws we all have them right?

trust me i have alot here are a few,

I am a brat,

Inscure,

Dependent on people like my frands,

I Bite myself,

I cry if i get to fustrated,

I am ugly ,

Can be biotch-ish,

I hate almost all preps and i judge books by covers also ,

I am VERY selfish half the time ...

Below list some of  your flaws .

 

© 2009 Jane Doe


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wow, you sound kinda like me. I pretty much have all of those (even though most people try to tell me i don't, but I don't believe them) except maybe the part about the judge books by covers (I do that sometimes, but I try really hard not to, and I'm gettin better) the prep thing, and the crying part. But I have lots of others, like always being worried about how I look, and lots of other things. But, don't worry about these. From the short time I've known you, you weren't any of these (except maybe a little hyper) You shouldn't worry about your flaws so much.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice, write, Me I have no flaws :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


You think you're ugly? I've looked at your pictures before, I think you're very beautiful! A few of my flaws: I get angry easily. Sometimes i wish people would appreciate me more. Sometimes I think i'm ugly, too. (I have pics up of me, also).

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, you sound kinda like me. I pretty much have all of those (even though most people try to tell me i don't, but I don't believe them) except maybe the part about the judge books by covers (I do that sometimes, but I try really hard not to, and I'm gettin better) the prep thing, and the crying part. But I have lots of others, like always being worried about how I look, and lots of other things. But, don't worry about these. From the short time I've known you, you weren't any of these (except maybe a little hyper) You shouldn't worry about your flaws so much.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww i like this piece of writing.. it has alot of attitude behind it :) and its a good venting poem.. keep it up , lets see my flaws are.. I care to much .. i make sure other people are ok and make sure they are happy before i make myself happy. people say im too sensitive but i like being different :)..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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