This feeling of ....

Sitting waiting for him.Just waiting passing time by talking to her girlfriends.He gets on to say hi and logs off on her birthday! Its actually very funny he doesn't know that she is dying slowly so very slowly just waiting for the perfect moment to tell him about all the pictures of hearts and her inatials and his in the middle and a string flow drawing out the word love. Then once again back in the trance of love he logs on and says a lame excuse then she types out

'I love you '

But as usuall he is off before she gets the chance to send it. He doesn't even know how it hurts me it feels like a knife stabbed through my back and twisted in circles. As you say your lame excuses and I act like I dont even know how your just lying straight face and everything. And then once again I feel the knife twist and twist around in circles.Again and again. But I am to terrified of what he will say back. Oh lord help me cuz gosh darn he is back on.

Author's Note

ingore grammar i suck at it
i thought about it but i cant tell him even if i want to i just cant :(

Reviews

[Alphachad]

Yes yes this one is truly a captivating story. Maybe a little polish with sentence structure and you can be on your way as a good writer. Nonetheless the story is heartfelt and beautiful. I like the last sentence the best. Dont's stop writing you cute little thing :D

[Jordan's Back]

This is Good. and you suck at Grammar, LOL The all time Grammar nazi LOL J.k :P

[Closed Account]

wow. this is good, abbie. I like it. I think you've been reading some of my thoughts, cuz this is exactly what i felt about my boyfriend, before we were together. This is pretty good. Good job, hun! :P

[Dillon Cotter]

this is an good start of a piece, i can understand the pain and empty aching feeling you are getting. Honestly though the best way to get over this love is to be honest about your feelings or to move on though. This is kind of a sad story but its good.

-Will