Without

Without

A Poem by Jane Doe

Without,

Without my friends I would be a reck,

no one to talk to ,

no one to console you when you sad,

No one,

No knight,

No domino,

No hershey's ,

No bob,

NO PRANA AHHH ,

nothing I would be lost and I just gotta say your my all to me my friends,

 latter on during my life you never know you could be my all if I become a hobo(YESSSS!!!!)

Anyway I guess I am just trying to say thanks gurlies and guyyiess (hehe) and I luv ya

:)<3katie:)<3

© 2009 Jane Doe


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This is a pretty good poem! So you want to be a hobo. I wouldn't recommend that. Used to be cool. Now it's not. Nothing but pain out on the rail....... water is hard to come by.
So, as friends are obviously important to you, keep writing. Pay no mind to that lonesome whistle blowing across the valley on a cold fall night......

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is Cute, I see your Style improving with each piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a pretty good poem! So you want to be a hobo. I wouldn't recommend that. Used to be cool. Now it's not. Nothing but pain out on the rail....... water is hard to come by.
So, as friends are obviously important to you, keep writing. Pay no mind to that lonesome whistle blowing across the valley on a cold fall night......

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 14, 2009

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Jane Doe
Jane Doe

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I miss the way words would flow out on to a page and express my deepest concerns so I have returned. more..

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