dead

dead

A Poem by Jane Doe

Dead,

Motionless,

Cold,

And paler than the blanket of snow that covers new york every year,

Dead,

Blood spattered,

Dark,

Dead,

No cry for help,

For you are dead to me,

goodbye.

© 2009 Jane Doe


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Deep, and Scary.........

Posted 12 Years Ago


Twisted and scary. It sounds like a murder, since the blood was splattered. But who ever it was didn't cry for help. I got ya, it's a metaphor. You got rid of them.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 11, 2009

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