Trust me babe it ain't you

Trust me babe it ain't you

A Poem by Jane Doe

Hot on the outside,

Cold on the inside,

Cold and hot no matter how we dress,

Puh-lease join the rest,

Don't lit to yourself,

We all need help,

And we all know were not talking about health,

Cause you lay there talk about her but your thinking about me,

I mean who wouldn't i am one of a kind every one knows it and i am not the goodie kind,

So rethink and love her cause baby no one ain't got enough patiance for me,

And you know how you ask me how was my day ,

No one NO one has the time in the world for me to tell you how it's going or how my life is,

NO ONE,

But maybe there is one ...

Just not you.

© 2009 Jane Doe


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It is what it is.
I have a feeling the author is accustomed to terrifying people with raw logic.
Not for the sake of being cruel, just keeping it real and not letting people BS each other.
You are pretty smart, for a kid. I am about half scared of you myself.
Thank you for sharing your unique perspective.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dang this is Very well put

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is what it is.
I have a feeling the author is accustomed to terrifying people with raw logic.
Not for the sake of being cruel, just keeping it real and not letting people BS each other.
You are pretty smart, for a kid. I am about half scared of you myself.
Thank you for sharing your unique perspective.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 3, 2009

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