The loner

The loner

A Poem by Jane Doe

The loner is the one outside walking on the pavements,

and you are wandering why the heck is that girl out there walking under the dark sky,

The loner is the one at school trying to act cool but not trying hard enough,

the cheerleaders tell her to keep her mouth shut if she wants to fit in so she does,

and then after all that she is back on the street again intill school,

She never has and she won't ever want to because she is scarred and alone and crying,

and begging and pleading but inside she's bleeding and dying slowly,

so slow that when she thinks about it it'll take a enterinity intill I find the perfect match for me and settled down with him.

© 2009 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
hey yueah soryy if i mispelled

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Love the format, Like the flow, and excellent words chosen to describe the Loner :)

and then after all that she is back on the street again intill school,
She never has and she won't ever want to because she is scarred and alone and crying,
and begging and pleading but inside she's bleeding and dying slowly,

Many can relate to this

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! very very deep...

Posted 14 Years Ago


=/

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 28, 2009

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