Back At It Again

You push, I pull,

You throw me away,

Yet I come begging back,

"But not this time" I say. 

You don't want me anymore,

But I need you,

And it more than sucks,

Because I DON'T want to. 

No, no I do,

But you're not good for me,

Im coffee and your cream,

I'm the lock and you're the key.

But are you? 

Are you right for me?

Can you make it alright?

Will you let me see?

Can I watch while you dance,

The dance of love,

While you open your wings and take off,

Gracefully, like a dove?

I'll ignore her,

For she makes me sad,

But I'm crazy,possessive,and selfish,

Yet this mames me terribly mad.

I just want to be happy,

Is that I do not deserve it?

I'll just ponder this quietly,

While on our memories in the clouds, I sit.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

You've described repetitive circles in life well....certain metaphors, like the coffee/ cream & lock/key sounded a bit rehashed....and I'm sure you meant "makes" instead of mames? :)

Great poetry.

[Everett DeValle]

Hey Brat, um, I mean Pinay Princess...such emotions in your poem...you've grown stronger as a Poetess...I just hope you grow up too fast...enjoy your teenage years...I hope summer has been fun. :)

[theartistichands]

Very nicely written, made me read with a flow.

[nivedha]

i underwent the same emotions quite recently.....and i got no words to describe them..infact i neva understood them myself...but here is a work of urz so beautifully put...that just read what i felt...lovely work dea!!

[Sue Hart]

A very dramatic poem. I enjoyed it. The emotion was caught as it told the story.