Bite me

Ask me if I f*****g care,

About the clothes I wear,

About then s**t you talk,

The way you walk.

 

The one night stands,

The begging hands,

The pills I pop,

The beats you drop.

 

The wars,

Definitely not the w****s,

Not the witches,

Or the mega b*****s!

 

I just dont give a f**k,

Cause we're all just s**t out of luck,

Got a promlem? Fight me,

B***h bite me.

Author's Note

LOLOLOLOL I got bored ^~^

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

While it may be a bit on the explicative side of things, it has a catchy rythem and a nice even cadence and flow to it. Perhaps a highschool war chant? ;)
Yet, for all the rage that encompasses this piece there is a side to most of your writing that adds in something more real than most who are simply ranting about day to day teenage life. Perhaps it's the fact I'm not seeing the poor me, woe is me attributes that I see so much. It's a breath of fresh air.

Keep the ink coming!
Aaron =)

[Jane Doe]

Thanks so much!(: yeah I don't really complain to everyone only my friends and I only have like three since I moved xD so yeah haha thanks again I'm glad someone gets a kick out of it:D
-a.

[Rtrt]

Yeah you did!

[Jane Doe]

Is that bad?

[Rtrt]

No way! I just understand some of us live in our heads when we are bored, and a lot of times we are diverted to a certain emotion. Anger is one of those emotions that we can get "bored with".

[Jane Doe]

Nah I'm always upset imma hot head and proud (:

[The Analog Kid]

This would be good for a spoken word style.

[Jane Doe]

Thanks?(: