Dear Love

A song I wrote for my wonderful girlfriend, Haylee c:

Dear love

Dear love, you're on my mind

Every hour of every day,
And I can tell you're there to stay

Let's keep it that way

Dear love, I lose my breath

When you're around

Hearing your voice is like I'm heaven bound

So why let God down?

Do you believe in true love?

We're just young and dumb but that's enough

I think this is true love

(la da da da da da) Dear love

Dear love

 

Dear love, I still can taste

That first kiss on my lips

What a spectacular moment of perpetual bliss

It's a feeling I'd hate to miss

Do you believe in true love?

We're just young and dumb but that's enough

I think this is true love

(la da da da da da) Dear love

Dear--

Do you believe in true love?

We're just young and dumb but that's enough

I think this is true love

(la da da da da da) Dear love

Dear love

Dear love

Author's Note

It's probably going to be difficult since you don't know the melody, but try not to read it as a poem. I understand the syllable count will mess with you at certain points, just keep in mind there's rests in there and stuff, it's not continually flowing like a poem.

Reviews

[Mia]

I really liked it. I could tell from the start it was probably a song I bet when put to lyrics its 10 times better. I really enjoyed reading this piece

[Sunny]

Haha! This is really cute! When i saw this part "...(la da da da da da) Dear love
Dear love..." i thought it might be a song.
nice job!

[misha]

"We're just young and dumb but that's enough." What a wonderful line! I really liked this piece. Great job!!!

[James McCoy]

Thank you for the feedback!!! :)

[misha]

You are welcome!