he made graduation

i watched a star fall

i looked for the moon to cry

there werent any clouds to cover

the moon would no longer shine

i saw a man, i witnessed his life

i watched him blanket skylines

with his indescribable light

and i watched him fall

the collapse was a spectacle

as it tore in through orbit

debris thrown likes slurs

it seemed darkest, as he neared surface

i watched this star fall

first his mother,

then his brother,

his mind most of all

the star who shined

collides with earth his beloved

and we're here to watch

whats become of him

i watched a man fall

a beacon of the city/the night life

to know all dreams end

in night city, there are no living legends

Author's Note

this is just a sort of silly one i did

Reviews

[Beren]

damn this is my favorite you've ever written. i read it with a melody and i want to write rhythm to it with my guitar,.
this was perfect, the imagery, the metaphors, the flow of the story.
you are definitely one of the best poets i know (and we are still so young) and i am so proud of you, proud of your story and where you have come from and everything you have the courage to write. man we need to get your name out to the world.