Hidden Life
A Poem by Fighter/Lover
Up highDown low Warm heart Cold soul Happy face Forced smile Hopeful eyes Sadly shy Silent people Questioning thoughts Porclein beauties Blank stares Hidden life Hidden well
© 2012 Fighter/Lover
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I thought this was well done! I love the simplicity of it, and it just goes to show that you don't need to have too many words to convey a very effective meaning. I do have one question, though - was "warn" in the third line meant to be "worn"? Or maybe I've just misunderstood something. Either way, a great gem, and something I think a lot of people can relate to!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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I thought this was well done! I love the simplicity of it, and it just goes to show that you don't need to have too many words to convey a very effective meaning. I do have one question, though - was "warn" in the third line meant to be "worn"? Or maybe I've just misunderstood something. Either way, a great gem, and something I think a lot of people can relate to!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
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Fighter/LoverDothan, AL
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I am 16 years old and I love to write poetry. I'm open to reading anything and everything. My poetry isn't the brightest, but i believe it reflects my feelings and feelings of others my age. more..
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