Blissful Pain

Pain all around me

shown in tears and broken smiles

 

the pages of my life

all tattered and torn

 

Trying to hide away from the world

keeping my hopes and dreams to myself

 

Soft sound of sobbing ringing through the air

hoping nobody hears the cries of pain

 

The only problem is; I like the pain

I am defined by my pain

 

Whether it be self-inflicted

or pain caused by others

 

I live for the pain

my sweet, blissful pain

Reviews

[Nemophilist Meraki]

I really like how you built up how the the pain is dark and leaving destruction all around you. And then that sudden intense ending, like a child holding on to a toy. I think it really depicts how long-term pain works, especially when it's self inflicted. It's dark and terrible, but at the same time, without it you feel like you are nothing.

Nice job. :)

[Blissful Sin]

such a twist! great writing and I love the emotions it gives off, great job!

-Bliss

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I totally loved this, I can feel this write, so emotional and well written.

[Skye]

Wow, twist at the end. This is written really well, even if it is a bit dark.

[Fighter/Lover]

Thanks....i thought so too