Life-long Cover

My dreary thoughts have taken over

they've given me my life-long cover

 

My protective blanket, my secure rock

my joyous place, long forgotten

 

The long days, one after another

full of things from which I long to recover

 

My dreary thoughts have taken over

they've given me my life-long cover

Reviews

[Sam Gregory]

I like this, like others have said this is nicely writteN, short And to the point but still beautiful. Well done :)

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i really loved this poem. i like the short and simpleness. :) very pleasant to read :) keep up the good work

[Kerri Hart]

very powerful and moving

but short and quick to the poin

beautifully written

[Serenity Faith]

This packs a powerful punch in only a few words. To me it could even be the chorus of a song. Very well done ^_^

[Owlgirl]

Nice repition, it pulls it all together, and not needlessly long, great job! :)

[Forever Hidden]

Beautiful!

[T. Logan]

This is good! I like the repitition.

[Arik]

Nice short poem, I like the repetition for emphasis.

[Skye]

Short but really good. I love the flow of your words.