Fading

Fading

A Poem by 5th Story Window
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Anger and betrayal, love and pain.

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The memories are numb

They were supposed to stay forever,

Doesn’t that mean anything to you?

It used to.

 

You have changed.

I should have listened,

When they warned me

Of all the bad you’ve done

 

You used my feelings,

For all your dirty deeds.

I was just a rag

That you could throw away.

 

My feelings are worthless,

And you make them feel wrong.

I hate them.

Why can’t they just fade??

© 2010 5th Story Window


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5th Story Window
Not complete, still in revision.

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powerful piece here, I like the style of writing and I can really sense the emotion you've expressed here. Good write, very interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on November 11, 2010
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5th Story Window
5th Story Window

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Hi ~ I've somehow lost touch with my creative side after high school, and this is my attempt to bring meaning back into life. I hope you enjoy reading my various entries that I'm going to try to make.. more..

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