A Taste of ...

Some things are not as good as they say they are

Anticipation builds

The charm of every first time experience

You take a taste

The flavor dances upon your tongue

A mismatched medley of white and brown

And you realize

Nothing but bitter disappointment remains 

Author's Note

I made this because of my utter disappointment in a certain coffee place... I expected more from you...

Reviews

[Infinite hexes]

Urgh YES! I know how that feels. I'm glad someone in the world wrote an accurate poem about sucky coffee places. I hate sucky coffee places :P
This is short and well written :)

[fiery-san]

Thank you. ^_^

[hardik]

Frankly speaking, the poem was ok. I liked the description of coffee as a medly of brown and white but it lacks a certain feel. Words are perfectly placed. It just lacked that feel.

[fiery-san]

Thank you for your thoughts, they're are much appreciated. ^_^

[kelvin]

Nicely written read here for everything that smells and looks good isn't always sweet as it or your mind thinks its going to be. we do learn from all experiences especially the bad ones. As always keep writing fellow writer

[fiery-san]

thank you kelvin. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

[kelvin]

You're welcome

[chandlerl]

Nicely thought out and has various ways you can enterprite it. I quite enjoyed this piece =)

[fiery-san]

Thank you. And yeah, I just realized after writing it how a person could interpret it in different ways. ^_^

[mandy]

lol,,,coffee!!! well, starbucks is over priced, imo...but i like that this poem can relate to other new experiences too....good one..

[fiery-san]

Yeah, I agree with that one, and thanks for the review. ^_^

[Frieda P]

ha, just wanted you to know I had a bad cuppa of this morning, and thought of you! ;-)

[fiery-san]

Hahaha... I see. I'm glad to have made an impression XD

[jamal]

haha this poem is the kind of poems i enjoy the most! didnt see that it was about the coffee place LOL :)))

Great job!

[fiery-san]

Thank you jamal! ^_^

[Pax]

LoL... well better luck next time... now i know...lol.. what type of coffee is that kabayan?

[fiery-san]

Starbucks... I'm thinking of giving it another chance, maybe I ordered the wrong type of coffee for me... Thanks for the review. ^_^

[Pax]

oh ... expensive one i guess... then lets say choose wisely.. hehe...
your most welcome kabayan!

[Andie]

Haha. I love how this was written about coffee! It could have so many different meanings. Stick to Starbucks. lol.
Good job. ^-^

[fiery-san]

I know. Thank you for the review...I'm glad you like it. Starbucks... hmm... this was kinda about it... but then again maybe I should really give that place a second chance...^_^

[ni ni]

This reminds me of the first time I had a rootbeer float... Nice job! I love being able to relate!

[fiery-san]

Hmm... never had a rootbeer float... but did have rootbeer before... it was okay but not just my type of drink. Thanks for the review ni ni. ^_^

[ni ni]

No problem, and yeah I do not like them myself.