One of my published works in college literary folio... this was actually inspired by the a manga who informed me that the characters found in the word rose has love, beauty and harmony... I was in one of those moods so...
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beautiful and true - roses always wilt, but they will bud and bloom again, as long as the plant is strong. Beauty, harmony and love may wilt, but they will always blossom, as long as the earth lives...
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you dreamer... and yes, the roses will bloom so long as you take care of them. ^_^
I like how you led the reader to the question at the end of the poem. It is sad how beautiful and good things can change to ugly and dirty things with time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
Simply Beautiful Kabayan...
I like it, well congrats sa publication...
The beauty... physically it fades with age...
........but if you talk about the beauty within it will last a lifetime...
harmony... well there is despite the harsh realities...
........nature is a perfect example of harmony...
Love... oh the ever powerful light...
........love can be tainted and become very much dark hatred...
awesome write kabayan.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you kababayan... I'm glad you like it.
I'm in the process of retrieving my old works...g.. read moreThank you kababayan... I'm glad you like it.
I'm in the process of retrieving my old works...glad to find this in my archives.
Yes, the beauty within is truly timeless but people don't always appreciate it...
Nature... the perfect balance...I agree
Love... so beautiful and complex
Glad you like it. ^_^
This is a poignant write, I hate to overuse that word but it certainly applies here. Love that last line, it sums the work up perfectly. Beautiful.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you Frieda, your reviews are always welcome. Not to sound repetitive but I'm glad you like the.. read moreThank you Frieda, your reviews are always welcome. Not to sound repetitive but I'm glad you like the poem.
Okay... first off, I'm currently into fanfiction writing... specifically I've written for Katekyo Hitman Reborn, Code Geass, and Vampire Knight to name a few...
So obviously from the line-up I'm mo.. more..