I love the emotion and nervousness that has been administered through this piece. It makes me remember my regret, the one I choose to suppress day after day. It's not a regret that eats away at my soul, but a regret that makes me wonder... What if? If I had went through that door, and then down that path, what could have happened? Would my life be drastically different? Would I be a different person than I am now?
Ah, again, an absolutely wonderful poem! Horrible for people with regrets, and invigorating for those who can understand how to deal with them properly ;) Well, for the most part, anyhow.
Bravo! Once again, Bravo!
Ah, you are brilliant.
---RbG
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I am glad you like the poem and took the time to leave your thoughts on the piece. I hone.. read moreThank you. I am glad you like the poem and took the time to leave your thoughts on the piece. I honestly never thought of that, I've based it more on the possibilities of things to come not on the things that occurred. Your thoughts are quite refreshing. ^_^
I love the emotion and nervousness that has been administered through this piece. It makes me remember my regret, the one I choose to suppress day after day. It's not a regret that eats away at my soul, but a regret that makes me wonder... What if? If I had went through that door, and then down that path, what could have happened? Would my life be drastically different? Would I be a different person than I am now?
Ah, again, an absolutely wonderful poem! Horrible for people with regrets, and invigorating for those who can understand how to deal with them properly ;) Well, for the most part, anyhow.
Bravo! Once again, Bravo!
Ah, you are brilliant.
---RbG
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I am glad you like the poem and took the time to leave your thoughts on the piece. I hone.. read moreThank you. I am glad you like the poem and took the time to leave your thoughts on the piece. I honestly never thought of that, I've based it more on the possibilities of things to come not on the things that occurred. Your thoughts are quite refreshing. ^_^
i thought about shadow beings or monsters... then as i glimpse on the tags lines and short description...its about the end of the world... well i always say the future is uncertain we never know unless we are seers that can see the future... i think we just let the future be and let it be... though its not bad to be prepared right..
great write... thought-provoking...
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you for the review, Pax. I'm glad you like it... and yeah, we are not oracles of the future bu.. read moreThank you for the review, Pax. I'm glad you like it... and yeah, we are not oracles of the future but there's no harm in being prepared. ^_^
I really like this! Then again I really like anything to do with midnight so that is why I clicked here honestly but your poem has so much more depth to offer. "Just to be sure... The end has truly come." That was my favorite part and got me to think the most (even though it was sadly the end.)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you ni ni, I'm glad you like the poem... and yeah, midnight is one of those timeless theme th.. read moreThank you ni ni, I'm glad you like the poem... and yeah, midnight is one of those timeless theme that even I can't seem to tire of. ^_^
"The gong echoes once more, signaling the coming hour
Midnight has come with shades of gray and black
Is it the beginning of destruction or is it really the end of it"
Okay... first off, I'm currently into fanfiction writing... specifically I've written for Katekyo Hitman Reborn, Code Geass, and Vampire Knight to name a few...
So obviously from the line-up I'm mo.. more..