Im here, so who are you?

Im here, so who are you?

A Poem by fierceauthor

Somebody told me that I wouldn't be great and 
in an instant I put the reciprocal into my mind 
and applied it to my race 
changing my focus, strength and pace

nothing could rearrange the gain 
that placed the chains on me 
Screaming "Love GOD" I felt the destiny
Satan couldn't ever get the best of me 

Who is he? to think he strong 
when my GOD planted power 
over the world this long

© 2016 fierceauthor


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Enjoyed this a lot. Powerful poem -- role of God. Liked the determined voice. Strong use of language and good use of rhyme for emphasis.
S.

Posted 3 Years Ago


THIE IS POWERFUL, ZEALOUS

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is anger here... Yet Faith seems to be the theme.
God is great! God is good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


WOW very strong context. Enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 7, 2015
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Austin, TX



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DOWN SOUTH AUTHOR(POETRY, SHORT STORY, NOVEL AUTHOR) EXPERTISE: ROMANCE, LOVE,LIFE AND IT'S STURGGLE, EVERYDAY STRUGGLES, PAIN, JOY ANIMAL RE.. more..

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