Writer's Block

I'm not that great at poetry and I wrote this in an attempt to see if I could write a poem. So it's nothing special but thought I'd post it here

You choke and you bind me
Restrict and confind me
No words can compare
The hate that I share

 

Commas here commas there
it's all just a glare
Comparisons are a must
I'm just ready to bust

 

My mind is a-racing
My heart is a-pacing
My fingers are aching
Oh, nothing is baking

 

It's short and not Long
I got it all wrong
You force it all out
Your making me pout

 

If I have to be frank,
My mind is just blank.
There's a door and a lock
Oh god, writer's block.

 

You laugh and you gawk
I stare at the clock
Not much time left to spend
but your not ready to bend

 

My paper is due
I'm ready to spew
Time ticks and you mock
Damn you Writer's block.

Author's Note

thoughts, opinions. As my teacher says, let's here your snaps and craps.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Hate to say this, but there's no such thing as a "Writer's Block" Yes, we do get that every now and then, but we just need to clear out our mind and do something else such as reading books, watching TV, walk around the park, drive around the main roads, and so on. Until the ideas, the inspirations, things like that, will hit us, then we can go back to writing...

Another advice for you and the other writers; Don't vent the anger, just stay cool and have patience, then the moment will come to you eventually...

On the other hand, it's a well written piece that you've released your anger onto, so it's still good tho...

[Jay]

Arg, writers block. The enemy of writers everywhere.

Nice flow to the poem, excellent expression of anger, and I like the ryhming too. I can never get my poems to ryhme.

[Wunderlich]

Eh, I hate writer's block so much. This poem definitely conveys the frustration and anger one feels when confronted with writer's block. The rhyme scheme kind of makes it sound simple, but it keeps the flow of the poem at least doesn't sound forced. However, I did enjoy the poem, and I really liked the last two lines:

"Time ticks and you mock
Damn you Writer's block."

Nice ^^