Writer's Block

I'm not that great at poetry and I wrote this in an attempt to see if I could write a poem. So it's nothing special but thought I'd post it here

You choke and you bind me
Restrict and confind me
No words can compare
The hate that I share

 

Commas here commas there
it's all just a glare
Comparisons are a must
I'm just ready to bust

 

My mind is a-racing
My heart is a-pacing
My fingers are aching
Oh, nothing is baking

 

It's short and not Long
I got it all wrong
You force it all out
Your making me pout

 

If I have to be frank,
My mind is just blank.
There's a door and a lock
Oh god, writer's block.

 

You laugh and you gawk
I stare at the clock
Not much time left to spend
but your not ready to bend

 

My paper is due
I'm ready to spew
Time ticks and you mock
Damn you Writer's block.

Author's Note

thoughts, opinions. As my teacher says, let's here your snaps and craps.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Hate to say this, but there's no such thing as a "Writer's Block" Yes, we do get that every now and then, but we just need to clear out our mind and do something else such as reading books, watching TV, walk around the park, drive around the main roads, and so on. Until the ideas, the inspirations, things like that, will hit us, then we can go back to writing...

Another advice for you and the other writers; Don't vent the anger, just stay cool and have patience, then the moment will come to you eventually...

On the other hand, it's a well written piece that you've released your anger onto, so it's still good tho...

[Michael Kerr]

i feel this alot i get blocks. when i get hurt by someone or i become sad everything comes rushing in. great poem. i liked it.

[Emunah June.]

Right as rain my friend. Right as rain!

[Dalaina Renee]

I like it! I wrote a poem about Writers Block awhile back. Check it out and let me know what you think!

[MaNdYe]

I thought it was very well explaned what you where feelen at that time. I liked it...

[J.Black]

I myself get writers block too much. Infact, I just write when something comes to me rather then trying to dig deep and find it. I need to be inspired you know? Other than that, nice! Actually, now that I come to think of it, we choose to have writer's block.

Anywho, I like what you did here, felt the emotion. Simply wonderful!

[Belator Books]

Definite snapping and a rhythmic treat. Good display of emotional prose. I look forward to reading deeper pieces from you. Keep up the pen.

[chloe cruz]

I really liked this, a lot! I think there is a "Writer's Block" unlike Joesph - Michael... I really like how you explain all the symptoms and the flow in this poem is amazing! Anyway, hehe, great write!

[Angel Baby]

Writers block happens to all. I find most of my inspiration comes either while I'm sleeping...(then I wake up and write it down )....or when I'm alone listening to music on the radio. Even taking a walk helps me clear my mind. I find that after a writers block is when I seem to come up with my most creative stuff. So don't lose hope...it will go away...and then great things will happen. P.W.

[Mercury Mirrors]

OOOOOO i wrote a peom by this very same name and i have to say I think urs takes the cake.
Very good job with the rhyme and rythym (sp).

MMFCL,
Malizzious.

[Lee E. Powell]

I don't know anything at all about poetry but I liked this one. It was cool! I'll read some more of your wok once I get off work.