I Took Him

My first attempt to write from a girl's perspective.

I took him into the city, he cried

I took him to the beach, he laughed

I took him to the store, he smiled

I took him to the building, he kissed me goodbye

Reviews

[Not A Writer]

Now what would make me wonder is why did he cry, laugh, smile and kiss you goodbye. Anyways good job. Ethan