I Took Him

I Took Him

A Poem by fictionwriter
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My first attempt to write from a girl's perspective.

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I took him into the city, he cried

I took him to the beach, he laughed

I took him to the store, he smiled

I took him to the building, he kissed me goodbye

© 2010 fictionwriter


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Now what would make me wonder is why did he cry, laugh, smile and kiss you goodbye. Anyways good job. Ethan

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 18, 2010
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fictionwriter

Harbor City, CA



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Recent college graduate, who loves writing horror style fiction, and stephen king. more..

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