Yours, Mine, Ours

Your love is strong.

My love for you is great.

Our love burst with passion.

 

Your eyes sparkle in the light.

My eyes are big and bright.

Our eyes look deep into each other.

 

Your trust is something I can keep.

My trust is worth living for.

Our trust is big enough for two.

 

Your mind is always on me.

My mind wanders to you.

Our minds think alike.

 

Your smile makes me smile.

My smile is lovely and big.

Our smiles are for each other.

 

Your heart is full of love.

My heart may jump out my chest for you.

Our hearts beat as one.

 

Your words are corny yet deep.

My words are sweet and for you.

Our words mean so much.

 

Your life means so much to me.

My life is worth a lot to you.

Our lives are forever.

 

Your hugs are warm and tight.

My hugs are close to the heart.

Our hugs are big and meaningful.

 

Your tears are meant for happiness.

My tears know you mean forever.

Our tears mean we are in love.

Reviews

[A*Meadows]

Like it. Passionate but simple.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Beautiful and simple. Just the way love should be.

[Sheila Kline]

A write of love and commitment that is punctuated by extra emphasis on the last line of each stanza with "Our" as the first word of each one. I like the feeling of togetherness this brings to your poem!

[Liza]

simplicity meets profound emotions

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet inspiration here!

[SarahCortland]

great poem :)

[JC]

beautiful and real and bare, poetry...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and thankfulness. I like the description and the emotion in your poem. A very strong ending to a poem of love. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote