Stuck

I met you at the park because you wanted me to.
I sit and talk with you like I'm supposed to.
I act like I'm listening to you because It's all I can do.
I kiss you because It's what couples do.
I pretend to be in love with you because, to me, that's what you do.
I can't make myself break up with you because I know people would judge me, including you.
So I'm stuck in this cycle of doing what is the right thing to do.
Someone help me, what do I do?

Reviews

[George Love]

Man, I like it! I will offer some suggestions, especially in the first line. "I meet up at the park with you like you told me to do" might work better if it gets simplified. For instance "I met you at the park because you wanted me to"

Sad, that two people pretned to go through the emotions of love, when it is all just to be "right" or for outward show.

The "right" thing here is to either really fall in love or run.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow, a quick, and fear I say Intelligent little piece I loved it :)

[Liza]

nice flow to this write - very sincere - filled with emotion - in the long run - its best to be honest with your mate and take it from there...you can't pretend to be someone you're not...it will hurt you both in the long run.