a hiaku that ends up a question is just right, but wondering if its right whether its the first or the second sentence, well i think its both. great work my friend.
Your haikus are so wonderfully written, how do you do it. I like the contradictory nature of this one, it really leaves you thinking, great job.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you very much. Honestly I just have random thoughts throughout the day, and I find that Haiku .. read moreThank you very much. Honestly I just have random thoughts throughout the day, and I find that Haiku is a great outlet for them.
I am a nineteen year old student living in Apple Valley, CA. I love a good story, it doesn't matter if it's a TV show, movie, short story, comic, poem, novel, video game, etc. As long as a story is go.. more..