Life

Haiku

'Tis a finite gift

The unending metaphor

Our mark on the world

Author's Note

Reviews good or bad are always welcome.

Reviews

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Haiku at its finest. Enjoyed!

[MOON]

Lovely

[Pax]

wow, love hiaku. this is really well thought out about life as an unending metaphor. great job my friend.

[demureminds]

So perfectly written. Really makes you think about it. Great work!

[Serenity Faith]

You added such depth in only a few words. I curtsy to you.

[....]

Simply amazing.

[Arik]

Thank you.