"Thank you, my love"

"Thank you, my love"

A Chapter by fhamie

Thank you for coming into my life.

Thank you for sharing memories with me.

Thank you for the smiles and laughters.

Thank you for all the texts and calls I have received from you.

Thank you for making me feel beautiful.

Thank you for solving my big problems.

Thank you for the drive.

Thank you for the photos we had.

Thank you for looking after me.

Thank you for all the knowledge we shared.

Thank you for allowing me to meet prcious people in your life.

Thank you for holding my hands when I was about to fall.

 

and most importantly...

 

Thank you for the love.

 

She is so grateful that she have met the most beautiful person in her life... and it's her one and only love.

 

She only have one thing to tell him...

"Just remember that once in your life...there was YOU and ME."

 

 

 

 



© 2010 fhamie


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Thank you very much for the review!:)

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Ron
Fham, No one could have revealed the pain and despair of breaking up and separation as good as this work. Now then! When the hurt turns to anger, dislike, hate and revenge; follow up with a new series of retribution. Love to see that. Good work! Ron

Posted 14 Years Ago


nicely written from start to finish
love the emotion and POV (point of view) of it
don't ever stop writing these pieces

Posted 14 Years Ago


The sequence of poems tells powerfully the blessing of a loved one but is soon poignant with his loss... It is good that in the end the memories are still beautiful and that there is a certain resignation and tranquillity

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice. Liked the way the chapters were poems. Good writes for all your chapters.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading all the chapters, I think the first one was my favorite, this series reminds my of that saying; Live, Love, and Learn.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A perfect ending to a beautiful poem. Love allow us to touch paradise and hell. You wrote excellent series of poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


A great tribute to ending a relationship.. in a good way and moving on. Holding the memories so precious but allowing room to grow from the love you shared to perhaps greater aspirations for both parties. Sometimes relationships are meant to last.. some are meant to be stepping stones (in a good way).. we learn lessons from past relations that we can carry forward and it can lift us.. as you have clearly written and shown here.. Brilliant!

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fhamie
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HI! Sharing my thoughts...whenever I feel the joy..whenever I feel blue..I just find my fave pen and write... I love writing, reading, travelling...I also love to sing...and I love looking at the.. more..

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