"Missing him"

For once...

 She thought she has met the most beautiful person in her life...

until now she's still trying to convince herself that she has..

after all the pains and failures,

She never had a single thought of losing her respect on him

simply because of all the wisdom he shared with her.

 

For all the good things he has done to her,

for all the help he has offered her,

and most especially, for making her feel

that she have once loved by him

and letting her love him freely.

 

She can never forget how it was...

having been on a relationship with a person

She once considered the most beautiful...

She wonder how he is now...

 wanted to ring him just to ask if he's ok.

 

 

To ask him if he had enjoyed his dinner,

if he eats well...

if he still manage to buy new clothes for himself,

simple things that he often forgets....

Oh how she miss him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Shellie]

This was really lovely. The actual simpleness of the feeling of wonder...did he remember to buy clothes for himself because he used to forget. That was very strong in this poem, the tenderness in the writing and the tone you used was excellent.

[ChristianM]

Another love poem. Ben running into these a lot lately. This was well played writing from the heart. Good job. You have more than a few haves that should be hads. On that should be in. Just some grammar stuff.

[Cassandra D.]

This was a very deep poem...
I enjoyed reading this...

[Theresa]

A piece I'm sure so many can relate to. When someone is in your life for such a period of time it's hard to let them go completely. I still wonder how old boyfriends of mine are doing. If they straightened their lives out if they became something. They were part of you at one point and its understandable to miss them and wonder. Nicely done.

[TamerQtaish]

Very soft piece,
I liked it a lot, and I felt a personal connection with the writer in this piece,
Maybe you should write me a "Missing Her" poem ;)

All the best,
Tamer

[Coyote Poetry]

A gentle and kind way to start your story. The description of hope and love was very strong at the beginning. Ending was very good. Concern for his simple needs. A excellent beginning.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

I loved the personal feel that you create here with this introspective piece. The feelings of lost love... the words just seem to pierce the heart... the desire to know how he is.. So tender and beautiful...

[fhamie]

I wrote this chapters for people who experienced love, breaking up and acceptance...

[deeps]

i like this yes I feel mix feelings in this write here. But it is very well expressed and well written.