"new love"

She'll be flying to her hometown tomorrow
The warmth of the radiator
brings the feeling of going home.
Another wintery day makes her whole being shiver.

From the window...
the silence fills the empty streets
Her heart wanted to shout
like an airplane screaming through the air.

She queried...numerous times
like a slight whisper of the wind
Would she start the journey or not?
and conceal all the excitement she has?

She then suddenly wept with frustration
a feeling of hopelessness
runs through her veins
today...she's at sixes and sevens.

another sleepless night
she perceives she'll have tonight
as her minds stuffed with odd notions
she laughed to herself
coz she thinks she's running like a headless chicken.

woke up with sadness in her face
she  then decided to leave the house
this time...went out
she strode off in confusion.

she drags her bags
and off to the train station
as she gets nearer
there she was, looking frail
she kept walking and lost her way
found herself feeling discouraged and downhearted.

part of her wanted to leave to see her one true love
and part of her wanted to stay in freezing cold weather
thinking that she'd rather endure the pains
than coming back home for a vacation
knowing that her love will not be with her anymore.

why does all those poignant memories
seem beyond endurance?
now...she fainted and
the moment she regained her consciousness
a massive crowd was around her.

gently, she opened her eyes
there was this man, staring at her
while he patiently waited for her to speak up
this kind hearted bloke,unexpectedly became her knight.

he walked with her and helped her find her way
and asked her where she was heading to
she said...i'm home already!
she couldn't understand why she said that
as if she travelled so long and found the gold at the end of the rainbow.

from then on...
her heart started to beat again  with happiness
this man took away gloomy days and sadness
she then never came back to her hometown
as now her heart's filled with new love.

Reviews

[C. Rose]

I think you present your work in a very interesting way. As the reader I felt like I was going through the pain with the point of topic because it was presented as if I was pulling her scattered thoughts and fears as they were raw and emerging. Good creativity in the presentation.

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully moving... like a story draped with song... There is a depth to your words... the lives... the love... shared... Such a good read!

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

... ... Damn!... Wow!... DAMN! WOW! lol I dont know what else to say!!! ummm its powerfull and in my tired state i couldnt really understand some of it but man did i feel it!!!

[mystic soul]

a very well written emotional piece.... you have written such a wonderful love story... pleasure to read it.. thanks for sharing it..:)

[Stacey Watts]

Very well written beautiful and sad. This was a wonderful piece expressed well.

[Helen Crutchett]

A beautiful love story told so well.
~ Helena

[Iota]

I like to view pain in life like this, we must endure it in order to get to the happiness that is waiting for us. Life is a cycle and we have our heartbreaks and we have our hearts explode with passions, over and over again, each time it is just a little different, a little more special. Meeting a soul mate, is always amazing. When you have that connection and go after it, and the other person does the same, it is pure magic. Lovely write.

[Cassandra D.]

This was a nice story...
I also loved the images you added.

[deeps]

such a sad write but yet beuatiful. So well written as well. I like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

My father told me as a young boy. Only way to get over a broken heart. Find a new one. A excellent poem. Description and story was very good. Ending left the reader with hope.
Coyote

[Jibey]

I like the images you have added... good ones!