misunderstood

 

They started conversations nicely
but something she said just suddenly triggered his anger
she wondered what she had said
and  felt guilty.

she cried...
that's all she can do
sometimes, it's her best reply
to cry in silence.

then she'll tell herself
'You'll be fine, don't feel guilty, You're just misunderstood'
nothing was said that never came from her heart
it's just how he takes it.

had she known that what she said
would be the reason for him to get mad
she would never say a word
for only she wants is to have a nice chat and be glad.

 

Author's Note

a lady crying in silence...;-(

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

Crying in silence is likely not going to lead to happiness. We do tend to hide from the triggers of another. Intension by the sender may or may not be heard the same way by the receiver. Worth a discussion though.

[Roger Turgeon]

Crying in silence is likely not going to lead to happiness. We do tend to hide from the triggers of another. Intension by the sender may or may not be heard the same way by the receiver. Worth a discussion though.

[MICHAELANGELO BARNEZ]

Nice work, Fhamie. You succeeded painting with words a sad moment in a relationship, kinda abusive anyway.
I liked.

[cest la vie]

What a haunting write... very well written...

[emmajoy]

What thoughts go into this post! A word inadvertently said in haste .. the sadness after it .. you've written a puzzled, regretful piece which could so easily be developed into more.

[Kiynteyh]

Sad but well written. It has a very realistic feel to it that reminds me a bit of myself and the many misunderstanding I have between myself and my special someone. Well done.

[Lindsay]

Very good. Simplistic and straight-forward. Line 10: "Your just misunderstood" should be "You're just misunderstood."

Very nice job

[Shellie]

I definitily think you could expand this into a story. Its got the bare bones already girl. Its grand as a poem too of course but you seem interested in developing it into a story. Any questions on that you know to ask ok pet.

Now..... I really love the emotion and the way you conveyed it. You put across the loneliness through the choice of words involving the tone. Also it pulls at the heartstrings with or without experience of this. Great job. (See mail)

[Dev]

aw.. a little mistake and everything goes down spiralling !! I loved readin this because the emotions come across easily !! :) good write

[Emily B]

I was just thinking a little while ago that if I ever get angry enough to be moved to tears . . . it will be over. No more words to be said after that. Some women don't cry til the very end.