"AURORA"

A Poem by fhamie

love shines so bright
sometimes like a northern light
from a distance sight
brings full of life.

i named this love "aurora"
a love with beautiful aura.

i can see the colours of his laughter
whilst he feels my gentle whisper
and the reflections of hues
promises that our love will go on forever.

© 2010 fhamie

Author's Note

a big thank you to Coyote Poetry>>>for suggesting a title>>i've changed the title now to "AURORA" (temporary title was" a love with beautiful aura")---i do appreciate my friend writers comments and suggestion.! again thank you.

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deeps

This is so wonderful, I like this write.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Coyote Poetry

A beautiful poem. The gentleness and love is expressed in your words. Aurora would be a good title. Bring readers to see what you are writing about. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago

melissa

very colorful great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on January 5, 2010
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fhamie

Manila, Philippines

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HI! Sharing my thoughts...whenever I feel the joy..whenever I feel blue..I just find my fave pen and write... I love writing, reading, travelling...I also love to sing...and I love looking at the.. more..