jitters

jitters

A Chapter by fhamie
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chapter 2

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i feel the jitters whenever he arrives
don't know what to do when he stares and say hi
i wanted to hide coz i'm too shy
this still i feel when i'm with him all day.

i patiently wait til the dawn breaks
i watched him sleep and hear gentle noise from his breath
i gently hold his hand
i love you that's what i want to say.

honey, be with me and stay
don't go til the sun sets
longing to be with you all night and day
all i ever dream is to be with you
until my dying day.


© 2010 fhamie


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A really romantic piece. Wanting to be with someone not wanting to be without them. Great piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved the rhyming you've added to this poem.


Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderful!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Kind of romantic idyll - all a-flutter

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this poem, it has a sort of story telling feel to it, gentle yet stimulating.:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Love and emotion leading to kind and sweet words at the end. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


@friend writers---- thank you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful, like it alot!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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fhamie
fhamie

Manila, Philippines



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HI! Sharing my thoughts...whenever I feel the joy..whenever I feel blue..I just find my fave pen and write... I love writing, reading, travelling...I also love to sing...and I love looking at the.. more..

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