MY ONLY

you are my love,my only love

you are my one, my only one

though i'm so far i never put you out of my mind

it's true i'm deeply in love with you...

it always seems our first and last

i don't know how long really it would last

hope you never change

cause i wouldn't...and that's a promise i made.

you always bring out the best in me

you've even tested my loyalty

i have proven that so many times

trust me honey, i will love you forever

until my dying day.

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

true love words here, full of feeling. great job!

[emmajoy]

Sweet and loving .. all it should be ..

[poetic soul]

a very lovey-dovey piece of work...
nice emotions...
portrayed well..

:) Love,
Krishna

[Georgia Gypsy]

Lovely poem, very thoughtfully written. I really enjoyed the movement through the emotions.

[Dev]

This has a very nice musical quality to it !! Very well written !! totally aww.. worthy :)

[Chirinos20]

wow, To describe what you feel for someone is so hard. Yet to describe what that person makes you feel is even harder. You did a wonderful job in this poem! good job!

[topsyturvy]

So much love! I loved this piece so much, it struck a chord in me and well, you are a very talented writer. Keep it up great work^^

[An owl on the moon]

So beautifully spoken... sharing the tenderness and courage that it takes to love for a lifetime. So well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Feeling of love and contentment is strong in your words. A poem that should be given to someone you love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[melissa]

simple and clear:) i loved it!