Teapot

Teapot

A Story by Fede

She was sitting inside the tea house. A good china teapot with green tea was on her table. It was completely white except for a single flower on top of it. She added a sugar cube to her cup and sipped.

It tasted sweet as jasmine.

She sat by the window, looking at the inside of the place. She wasn't paying attention to where she held her cup. All of a sudden, she started seeing blurry. The cup was near her nose. The heat blurred her glasses. She laughed and cleaned them.

She wasn't happy. Her mind was trapped inside a puzzle. She fancied someone but started developing feelings for another guy. Her thoughts were tangled like her hair and dark as her soul.

She kept drinking tea while staring at a wall that held teabags of all over the world.

If she would've known what would've happened, she would've turned.

A guy was walking down the street and stopped at the tea house display window. He wasn't interested in anything inside but one thing. Lisa and her, once, blurry glasses.

He was too afraid to enter and talk to her. Maybe, just maybe, if she was looking at the opposite direction, her sight would've met his.

© 2014 Fede


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"in her table" = on her table
"but a single" = except for a single
"looking to the inside of said place" = looking at the inside of the place
"with teabags of all over the world" = that held teabags from all over the world
Choppy and doesn't flow very well. Nice story and makes me wonder what happens next.



Posted 10 Years Ago


Fede

10 Years Ago

Thanks for checking out this, correcting it. Made it in a dash while studying. Do not mix studying a.. read more
Mikayla_Stagg

10 Years Ago

No problem :) its really a great story though

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Added on June 22, 2014
Last Updated on June 28, 2014
Tags: tea, teapot, fiction, love

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Fede
Fede

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