Going Broke Fast

I wanted to make sure that the poem wasn't directly referencing the word Going Broke Fast. (For an acrostic Poem)

Going on and on

On to the end

Is it actually that time?

Never to see the ones I love again

Going away forever

 

Bracing for the lost

Recognizing my loss

Only the pain remains

King of the abyss

Everlasting reminiscer

 

For the hope to return

A single way I would

Sacrifice all I held sacred

To keep from losing it all

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is painful. Very well written Chris... the acrostic is fabulous!
Such creativity.. and emotion. It's not easy to incorporate emotion
into a structured form. You've done it well.

Great work!

[Wicahpi]

I would, too, Chris; as most of us would, I think.
This is a nice emotional piece about losing those we love.
Having just lost my grandmother, I can relate.
Thank you for your entry!!
Have a great day & good luck!

[Dalaina Renee]

Well written!